After the Cooling Rain


English: The sun appears after a heavy rain in...

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Her temperature was rising,

As she remembered the night before,

His kisses had been scorching hot,

And melted her to the core,

 

Then rain clouds draped the earth,

And made her day seem grim,

A barrier that seemed impenetrable,

Keeping her from him,

 

But a cool breeze has been blowing,

After the summer rain,

She’s ready to seek the chill of night,

And heat things up again.

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6 thoughts on “After the Cooling Rain

  1. Well written Dan! It was sassy and romantic and made me kind of blush a bit. Felt like I was in a woman’s mind, as she waited impatiently to see the one who set her on fire. At the same time, I felt like it was the beach who was waiting impatiently for the sun who set her on fire. The rain cooled her down and the night was beautiful, but cool keeping her from the one who brings her the warmth she seeks. Loved it! Be blessed.

    http://elizena-lovingmycreator.blogspot.com/2012/03/in-moonlights-vision.html

    • If I dared to write well enough to make you blush and feel the heat deep inside, I would hope you would think of the poetry in the Song of Solomon. Love poetry at its finest.

      May the sun be on your face and the wind at your back as the Lord blesses you throughout the day. Carpe diem!

    • Your poem, “Never in Mind” , is beautifully written and clearly shows your love of night. Thank you for your comments on my poem.

      May the sun be on your face and the wind at your back as the Lord blesses you throughout the day. Carpe diem!

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